Oral Research Report Feedback

     Shawn

Class Avg

Introduction: 4.3
Method: 4
Results: 3.9
Delivery: 4.3
Accessible: 4.2
Visual aids: 4

Personal Avg

Introduction: 4.7
Method: 3.8
Results: 4.3
Delivery: 4.8
Accessible: 4.5
Visual aids: 4.2

     Shawn

07/01/2016 -

I liked the way...you highlighted that this article is older and why you selected it based on it's history. You did a great job of setting up and explaining the coding of the comments. Your delivery is absolutely phenomenal--you are so fluent and knowledgable.

One suggestion is... perhaps finding a way to parse back a little of the text? The colors really help but if you can bring it to a little bit more with bullets that might help


07/01/2016 -

I liked the way...your pacing and cadence is easy to listen to. Excellent blend of conversational and academic language. Great connection between oral presentation and visuals. Very well done!

One suggestion is... make your slides as simple as possible. See if an observer can figure out what's happening in the slide in 2 seconds or less. Use slides to compliment comments, not duplicate them.


06/29/2016 -

I liked the way...Loved the sample visual.
Great explanation of the Australia graph and why you chose to highlight it.
Impressive the way you made up time.
You were very fluent with a lot of information.
The color coding on text-heavy slides was helpful.

One suggestion is...I got a little lost on the blocks of heiarchy.


06/27/2016 -

I liked the way you connected the study to your work, and how you used your slides to explain the blocking.

One suggestion is to select certain specific statistics of note (although I liked that you highlighted within the slide.


06/27/2016 -

I liked the way...Data table was highlighted to draw focus to important figures.

One suggestion is... Data analysis was not thoroughly described though I don't think it could be under time constraints


06/24/2016 -

I liked the way...ended right on time!!! WOW! I liked the way you incorporated visual aids (screenshot of the impact effect of journal, word cloud, etc.) and spoke very fluently about the topic with visual aids but not just speaking from a powerpoint.

One suggestion is... provide a bit more of your perspective/analysis on methodology, whether this was appropriate to the question--this came after your time was up. Talked more about methodology, sampling after we finished